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"Fuck yeah, I was scared, but it was the good kind of scared that makes you fearless."

One of my favorite things about your writing are gems like that.

I like the historical fiction/ use of real life characters in the story, Art Pillsbury in chapter 2 for example. When reading, I often get intrigued by such references, "chasing rabbits " I call it and veer off into other areas. A bad habit maybe.

I find the flow a bit choppy, but I can get used to that.

I like how occasionally you will remind the reader that you're in the bar listening to Journey tell his story.

I'm looking forward to the next installment.

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